Avalon Acoustic Guitars

by **mutley2209** » 21 Jun 2009, 21:13

i've done a reviesed video of a little song i've come up with, still a work in progress but want to get as much feedback and views/ratings and comments on it as possible. please have a look and let me know what you think, hearing from players much more experienced than me is great!

and leave a good rating on it lol

cheers all!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wcpLJDKB9MA

by **mutley2209** » 22 Jun 2009, 21:51

aye cheers will have to do that, its something i came up with while playing around with some alternate tunings

defenatly got to work at it tho, cheers for checking it out

by **Coen V** » 23 Jun 2009, 16:44

Hi Mutley,

Great riff you got there, and I also agree with GP on the beat, looks like your engine troubles will get you stuck in the desert

But 'chapeau' for undertaking the adventure and safe journey

Cheers, Coen

by **mutley2209** » 24 Jun 2009, 15:43

cool cheers guys, practise makes perfect ey

trying it witht he capo on the forth, sounding nice

think i need to beef up the bridge to start with but that'll come with more experience i suppose, till then practise practise practise

by **Lentin** » 30 Jun 2009, 22:22

Can I be a bit hard?
This video reminds me my practising hours.
Some time I found a chord sequence that sounds really good to me and I can play it 'for hours', with very slight variations.
The good thing is that it can be part of something else, if get again the 'momentum' and find something that really engages with that original sequence (something that barely occurs, btw).
So, I find it a really nice sequence, very good sound (percussion probably on some of the rounds, to change the sound or to reinforce the beat) and a good work in progress.
I'm not saying you need AABA or whatever standard structure, (standards are made for us to innovate breaking them), but I feel it needs a more structured and complex schema.

With good feelings..

by **mutley2209** » 01 Jul 2009, 14:22

cheers for checking it out

don't mind anyone being 'hard', posted it here cos your all more experienced than me and getting feedback from everyone is great

, yeah i've a tune in my head, where it could go by beefing up the bridge and we'll everything :lol:

work in progress, will be a little while before i finish it, everyone starts somewhere i suppose :lol:

by **Fletch** » 04 Jul 2009, 22:05

Hi Mutley,I really enjoyed your piece. You can tell the timing is a bit off in places, but who cares (Until you are "performing"). Your Avalon sounds good too, how were you recording it? Great job mate, look forward to hearing some more

Simon (Fletch)

by **mutley2209** » 05 Jul 2009, 19:17

cheers for checking it out Fletch

yeah my timing is off a bit :oops:

needs some work, gunna get my brother to help me out with it he's writen some really good riffs

i recorded with my Lag Autumn Dreadnaut (pete doherty plays a Lag summer

), an used my phone to record it, turned out alright

by **mutley2209** » 19 Aug 2009, 14:43

i've had another crack at it

i play a bum note or two :oops:

but hope you like it, have a look let me know what ya think, some feedback and a a click on the rating on the vid would be great, cheers guys

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LksJb8BPO_k

by **mutley2209** » 23 Aug 2009, 18:24

I'VE MADE A MUSIC VIDEO

of sorts anyway :lol:

it's to accompany the song, i did a fresh recording for the audio off my phone, didn't turn out too badly. Take a look and click on the review, 5 stars i hope :wink:

cheers all for taking the time out to have a look and for the feedback it's all influenced its development

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k9re8gVbtpk

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